“I learned that you should feel when writing, not like Lord Byron on a mountain top, but like a child stringing beads in kindergarten — happy, absorbed and quietly putting one bead on after another." ~Brenda Ueland
Hi Dusty!!!!!! (sorry for the multiple exclamation marks, I’d add more but that would be very indecent) Yeah, I signed up for this poetry class since I’d figured it would be a great way to learn from poetry masters … and now I know that I can’t count syllables to save my life 😦
Nice to see you here too, by the way ;-).
Yes you can, count syllables. Each syllable is one beat, and the first line/sentence of a haiku is five beats. Mar y had a lamb – five beats. Which I’m sure you already know, duh on me. I can’t wait to read more. I wish you would put that last poem you wrote (a couple weeks ago, I think) front and center!!!! Hugs! 🙂
Wish it were that simple. I hated doing poetry for such a large part of my life 😦 Plus, it doesn’t help much that English isn’t my first language so I end up using a completely different formula to count those blasted syllables 😦
Brilliant.
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Thank you 🙂 Hopefully, I got something right.
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I’M SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU HERE!!!!!!!! Signed, Your biggest fan 🙂
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Hi Dusty!!!!!! (sorry for the multiple exclamation marks, I’d add more but that would be very indecent) Yeah, I signed up for this poetry class since I’d figured it would be a great way to learn from poetry masters … and now I know that I can’t count syllables to save my life 😦
Nice to see you here too, by the way ;-).
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Yes you can, count syllables. Each syllable is one beat, and the first line/sentence of a haiku is five beats. Mar y had a lamb – five beats. Which I’m sure you already know, duh on me. I can’t wait to read more. I wish you would put that last poem you wrote (a couple weeks ago, I think) front and center!!!! Hugs! 🙂
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Wish it were that simple. I hated doing poetry for such a large part of my life 😦 Plus, it doesn’t help much that English isn’t my first language so I end up using a completely different formula to count those blasted syllables 😦
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Oh! I better understand now, thanks. And I’m sorry for the dumb (in retrospect) tip.
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You’re welcome 🙂 And the tip wasn’t dumb at all 🙂
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I LOVE your tanka. Ok, I’ll stop pestering you now. 😉
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Why thank you, Dusty! 🙂
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Some things worth waiting for. Excellent!
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Thank you, JoHanna 🙂
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splendid!
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very nice
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Very good!
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Thank you, Josh! 🙂
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decently perfect! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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